Great analysis but you must make sure you're not slipping into informal chat. Be careful of key terms as well - juxtaposition and analysis (not analysation!). More detail is needed in your essays like your magazine analysis, do not overcrowd information!
Great analysis but you must make sure you're not slipping into informal chat. Be careful of key terms as well - juxtaposition and analysis (not analysation!). More detail is needed in your essays like your magazine analysis, do not overcrowd information!
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